The Silent Aviator

Aviator, The Alien's are attacking because o' this jemstone which is important for some reason...... Thank you for clarifying. FYI, my dad was in the Army...of course he's nothing like ...

Very good, Ladyequine! :) I don't know enough about poetic structure or grammar to post a proper crit, but I know enough to realize that this is an awesome poem.

First of all, welcome to the YWS! :D- As for your writing, good job! This peice is very well-written.I wish I could critique it grammaricly, but grammar is NOT my ...

I rarely venture into the Romantic Fiction forum, but I then saw that this work was the "featured story" and came to take a look... VERY good work, Areida!! Well ...

I am a big fan of both Harry Potter and LOTR,both the books and movies, but I'd have to choose LOTR as my favorite. In my opinion, LOTR is definitley ...

Wow. Very good and original...almost feels like a poem.I thought the long part in which she explains what happened was a bit too long;all the reader needs to know is ...

:D Blew me away...I like it a lot. I didn't find anything wrong graamaricaly, but I'm terrible at grammar/poetry structure, so I wouldn't be the one to ask. :(

Ddaaammmnn... Nice poem! I wish I could write a longer review for this, but my knowledge of grammar/mechanics/petry is very limited. It doesn't take a grammar whiz to recognize a ...

Hello... Welcome to the YWS! :) Anyways, kickass story. Very well written, axious to read any continuation s of it. I didn't find any grammarical errors, but grammar is definatley ...

Overall, a good, well written poem. I couldn't find any grammarical errors...but, then again, I'm the one who has a C in English. I personally think that this poem applies ...

damit i just wrote two pages on this and accidentally deleted them. :evil: {The Silent Aviator} That must suck :? (couldn't get the quote to work) True, Supermal, true. :)

First of all,Amazing story! :) Deja Vu...your story was eerily reminiscent of a coversation I had with a fellow student on today's bus ride...I'm serious, your story is an almost ...

Well written! The only thing that kind of bothered me was that nearly the entire peice was a big conversation between the characters. Then, again, my stories don't feature much ...